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PostSubject: A Christmas Wish   Tue Nov 18, 2008 4:32 pm

Sierra sat in the living room watching the lights on the Christmas tree. Serena had decorated the tree alone this year, Sierra had been to week, she was to weak to do much of anything. The miracle she had been praying for hadn’t seem to be granted, the cancer that had taken both of her legs was still ravaging her body, she was no longer on chemo it was no longer working, nothing was working and night and day she was being pumped with morphine to ease the pain.

" Serena I do not think I can hold on much longer. " Sierra said weakly one night.

" Sierra if you are too tired to fight I understand. "

" I want to make it through Christmas. "

Both the girls let the tears fall from their eyes as Sierra spoke. It wasn’t that Sierra had completely giving up hope, but she had to face the fact that she may not make it through this, short of a miracle she would not make it.

Lord give me the strength to get through it, and if I have to go, let Serena be able to get through this.

When Sierra was up to it, her and Serena would sing Christmas Carols just as they had done every Christmas before, and singing actually made Sierra feel a little better, made her for a moment forget the pain she was suffering.

Christmas morning came and Sierra was still hanging in there, it wasn’t an easy fight, but prayers were being answered. Sierra was actually starting to feel better and stronger, but either Sierra or Serena dared not get their hopes up to high, just to have them crushed again.

As they celebrated Christmas just Sierra and Serena together, they cherished each moment it had been the way they had celebrated since their parents had died just the two sisters, and now with Sierra so sick they knew they had to cherish the moment, each and every moment.

A few days after Christmas Sierra went for more blood working and the miracle they had been praying for was confirmed, Sierra had gone into spontaneous remission but both Sierra knew that it was not spontaneous at all that n fact it was the Lord who let this miracle happen.

" Thank you Lord. " Was all Sierra could say with the tears of joys in her eyes.


Recycle the story above in one paragraph only with your own words. Don't change the plot! You are still be able to modify the characters and the settings.

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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:32 pm

hay.. there..

now i can give my chance about the narrative text:


At the once christmas, the girl in living room look the lights on the Christmas tree she have name is Sierra. And Serena make ornaments of the tree alone for this year, Sierra can’t make anything for in this time and she had in this year. Because now, she gotten of the disease in her body and can make low of body endurance. This is reason about the cancer in her body make the both of legs was still ravaging. She so suffer from this disease without follow chemo and she must to pumped with morphine to make easy the pain in her body.

Sierra feld can be able to hold the disease on much longer. She can’t make something for her life because she so tired to do that. Serena just can to amuse and give anything for Sierra and included the Christmas.
they are feld so sad and until tears from they’re eyes. But Sierra not easy to give up with the disease, she always hope about the disease can heal from her body so Sierra hope to earn the miracle in this life to can make for people in beside her. But short a miracle to do that.....
she pray to God for give the streght to get this problem and for Serene, Sierra hope to she can acceptance and be able about this big problem in Sierra life.
Every year in Christmas Sierra and Serena always singing together. And for this Christmas they are make the tradition to sing with the song is Christmas Carols. Sierra feel better good in the condition of her body. Sierra with some time she can forget this moment about the disease cancer in body.
And the Chistmas is came, in the morning Sierra earn feel better in the body. Her praying being answered to can stronger in this day because in this day so speciall for her life. But Sierra and Serena can’t hopes up to high they are be must to always pray to God.
They are celebrated the Christmas always together because they parents died and just the two sisters, especially now Sierra have the disease can make she died. So, in this moment very speciall from the other moment in they’re life.
Some day from the Christmas Sierra take the put outside for more blood activity in her body, just miracle to can help her. And by the grace of God, disease in Sierra body can gone and she live to spontaneus to thank’s God... because God let the miracle happen...
She said something to God “Thank You God” with the tears in her eyes....
She very happy about that, so she can make the other activity with her sister... Very Happy Smile Surprised Laughing tongue Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: a christmas wish   Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:45 pm

Sierra really likes see aught Christmas tree on the house it, day it so favor to decorate that Christmas tree, sierra has a lot of lack and she have no longer work heavy work because disease cancer has taken both of its foot.
In broad daylight it no longer working and nocturnal it was given by doctor soreness detention to quiet soreness. And Serena says something to someone because it have can't wait any longer” sierra say that thing with poor body.
And it will do it via Christmas.
Women that hear talk from sierra they are really sad their after hear talk from sierra, and they hope that sierra not do that thing.
After GOD member sierra tries a fall it can pass all these,
While that sierra starts a song Christmas song with fun
After Christmas was arriving it prays that it can no longer endeavoring and no longer perceive pain, and they celebrate Christmas in company with sierra. Some day’s disease sierra recurrence Christmas after and they just wait miracle from GOD.
Sierra utters thanking love to GOD with its heart and soul.
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PostSubject: a christmas wish   Mon Dec 01, 2008 9:54 pm

on the seirra house, she have a chrismas tree. and according at moment she seed the christmas tree and she hope in order that she can to decoreted the christmas tree with serena her sister. but her sister get a disease on her body. the disease is a cancer. and seirra praying to god in order that serena can be to recover again. and she hope in order to she and serena can singing together christmas carol again like they do it before. and like they celebrate before they parents was to die. and just the two sister to celebrate alone in chrismas but they very be graceful because they can to celebrate the chrismas but without they parents. santa santa
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PostSubject: a christmas wish   Mon Dec 01, 2008 9:58 pm

on the seirra house, she have a chrismas tree. and according at moment she seed the christmas tree and she hope in order that she can to decoreted the christmas tree with serena her sister. but her sister get a disease on her body. the disease is a cancer. and seirra praying to god in order that serena can be to recover again. and she hope in order to she and serena can singing together christmas carol again like they do it before. and like they celebrate before they parents was to die. and just the two sister to celebrate alone in chrismas but they very be graceful because they can to celebrate the chrismas but without they parents.
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Tue Dec 02, 2008 7:33 pm

Many people have wish wish in Christmas of course.
In the Narrative text, tell about the girl that have cancer .
the girl very wishful to God for cure her disease.
Surely, God never forget He's child,
and the last, God make the girl save from her fear.
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:59 am

the story tells about Seirra. she only look her sister that decorated the Christmas Tree.
She cannot helped her sister, because she was weak. the cancer disease was taken both of her legs. Seirra not have a longer time to do anything. she only use morphine to ease the pain.

Seirra sister that called Serena, always together with her.


Seirra always hope that she will get the miracle. beside that, Seirra always pray to God, so that she will have strength to do her day, Seirra also pray for her sister Serena.

Seirra and Serena, was sing the Christmas carol. They always sing together before Christmas time. When their sing togerther, actually Seirra feel more better, because she can forget her sick.

sometimes Seirra and Serena have the spirit to do their day. But, their dared not get hopes up to high. so that they always fall again.

Their hope, their must always together, because they not have someone. Their parents and their sister was died.

a few days after Christmas, Seirra get the miracle from God....

Seirra just give thanks to God and praise Him, because God make the miracle in her life.
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Fri Dec 05, 2008 12:13 pm

At Christmas time, a woman sitting in the room watching, and he contemplate Christmas tree lights. Sierra have a struggle, because he has a disease, namely cancer. Sierra hopes a miracle will happen, so can be cured.
Sierra feels that he will not recover again.
But he is hoping that God would through Christmas., That Sierra pass the disease.
Sierra went to worship him and sing Christmas. At that time, Sierra feels there is little strength to face it.
Now Sierra lives with his sister. Because their parents have died.
In the morning., Sierra hopes that God would answer prayer, piano.
Finally. God is listening to the piano-prayer. So that any miracle happened.
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PostSubject: rep Narrative   Fri Dec 05, 2008 3:14 pm

Sierra was lost the hope, she don't know must do what things. She just sat front on the Christmas tree. she have a cancer, she can not to defend the painful. But, Jesus is so kind, He help sierra from her problem, He gave sierra the wish, He gave sierra the new spirit so sierra revival from her painful. Sierra received the Christmas wish. so the idea is if we believe in Jesus, we can get the wish from heaven.




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PostSubject: I tell you...   Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:03 pm

Sierra was one of cancer sufferer who felt everything was not good and unfair. She lost hope and gave up. When she was in the darkness of life, she almost lost her hope to stay alive. But JC gave her a true friend, Serena. Serena gave support and motivation.

When they sang Christmas Carol together, Sierra felt better than before. Although, it's an usual thing every Christmas like decorate Christmas tree.

A few days after that, she went for more blood working. And,,,,
Surprise!!!! She is healthy, no cancer, and no more suffers.
And with falling tears, she said, "thank you Lord!"
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sat Dec 06, 2008 5:38 pm

Sierra sitting and the ornaments and Christmas tree lights feel lonely. He does not feel powerless and looks very weak. Sierra disease cancer. life is not too long, but Sierra has a friend who still care about the lives, he serrena. he always gave support to the Sierra.

They are always celebrate Christmas together. and always pray that Sierra can serve the day to day life, and he may get a miracle. And a day of prayer and their voices are heard by God, so that Sierra can recover from the disease of cancer. He was very grateful and thankful because he never surrender to the situation and the problems he faced.

Sierra say to God: Thanks God because you never leave me alone


_Merry Christmas_ santa santa

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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sat Dec 06, 2008 5:59 pm

Sierra sat in the living room watching the lights on the Christmas tree. Serena had decorated the tree alone this year, Sierra had been to week, she was to weak to do much of anything. The miracle she had been praying for hadn’t seem to be granted, the cancer that had taken both of her legs was still ravaging her body, she was no longer on chemo it was no longer working, nothing was working and night and day she was being pumped with morphine to ease the pain.

" Serena I do not think I can hold on much longer. " Sierra said weakly one night.

" Sierra if you are too tired to fight I understand. "

" I want to make it through Christmas. "

Both the girls let the tears fall from their eyes as Sierra spoke. It wasn’t that Sierra had completely giving up hope, but she had to face the fact that she may not make it through this, short of a miracle she would not make it.

Lord give me the strength to get through it, and if I have to go, let Serena be able to get through this.

When Sierra was up to it, her and Serena would sing Christmas Carols just as they had done every Christmas before, and singing actually made Sierra feel a little better, made her for a moment forget the pain she was suffering.

Christmas morning came and Sierra was still hanging in there, it wasn’t an easy fight, but prayers were being answered. Sierra was actually starting to feel better and stronger, but either Sierra or Serena dared not get their hopes up to high, just to have them crushed again.

As they celebrated Christmas just Sierra and Serena together, they cherished each moment it had been the way they had celebrated since their parents had died just the two sisters, and now with Sierra so sick they knew they had to cherish the moment, each and every moment.

A few days after Christmas Sierra went for more blood working and the miracle they had been praying for was confirmed, Sierra had gone into spontaneous remission but both Sierra knew that it was not spontaneous at all that n fact it was the Lord who let this miracle happen.

" Thank you Lord. " Was all Sierra could say with the tears of joys in her eyes.


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Sierra always wait a miracle to change sierra's life. Sierra always pray to GOD for healthy and GOD answer sierra's pray and God give more age like sierra request to GOD. GOD give 'THE BEST CHRISTMAS' in sierraS life.
And sierra GIVE THANKS to GOD.
"Thank you LORD".....because YOU give a miracle to sierra.
santa santa


"MERRY CHRISTMAS Sierra & Mr. CH Kahuweka"
GGU.
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:19 pm

sunny santa santa santa

the story tells about Seirra.
sierra just helped the her sister for sitting decoration of christmas,,
but...
sierra can not helped her sister,,because sierra disease cancer,,
but,,,serena always gave support and motivation for sierra...

Seirra always hope that she will get the miracle.
seirra always pray to God,,,
surprise!!??!!??
seirra is healthy from cancer disease..
sierra very happy....

GBU....
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sun Dec 07, 2008 7:51 am

this story is about..

Sierra only look her sister that decorated the Christmas Tree.
She cannot helped her sister, because she was weak. the cancer disease was taken both of her legs. Seirra not have a longer time to do anything. she only use morphine to ease the pain.

Seirra sister that called Serena, always together with her. Seirra always hope that she will get the miracle. beside that, Seirra always pray to God, so that she will have strength to do her day, Seirra also pray for her sister Serena.

Seirra and Serena, was sing the Christmas carol. They always sing together before Christmas time. When their sing togerther, actually Seirra feel more better, because she can forget her sick.sometimes Seirra and Serena have the spirit to do their day. But, their dared not get hopes up to high. so that they always fall again.

Their hope, their must always together, because they not have someone. Their parents and their sister was dies. few days after Christmas, Seirra get the miracle from God.... Seirra just give thanks to God and praise Him, because God make the miracle in her life.
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sun Dec 07, 2008 3:11 pm

huhuhuhhuhuhuhuhu, so very sad


this is story about girls without hope because their parents was die,,,
in Christmas night, when all the people was hanging together, feel the true Christmas,,,,

they decorated Christmas tree alone, but the important think that their always together a never living one.

in this painful moment they never forgot to praise and worship to God,,,




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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sun Dec 07, 2008 4:09 pm

Mr. Chres wrote:
Sierra sat in the living room watching the lights on the Christmas tree. Serena had decorated the tree alone this year, Sierra had been to week, she was to weak to do much of anything. The miracle she had been praying for hadn’t seem to be granted, the cancer that had taken both of her legs was still ravaging her body, she was no longer on chemo it was no longer working, nothing was working and night and day she was being pumped with morphine to ease the pain.

" Serena I do not think I can hold on much longer. " Sierra said weakly one night.

" Sierra if you are too tired to fight I understand. "

" I want to make it through Christmas. "

Both the girls let the tears fall from their eyes as Sierra spoke. It wasn’t that Sierra had completely giving up hope, but she had to face the fact that she may not make it through this, short of a miracle she would not make it.

Lord give me the strength to get through it, and if I have to go, let Serena be able to get through this.

When Sierra was up to it, her and Serena would sing Christmas Carols just as they had done every Christmas before, and singing actually made Sierra feel a little better, made her for a moment forget the pain she was suffering.

Christmas morning came and Sierra was still hanging in there, it wasn’t an easy fight, but prayers were being answered. Sierra was actually starting to feel better and stronger, but either Sierra or Serena dared not get their hopes up to high, just to have them crushed again.

As they celebrated Christmas just Sierra and Serena together, they cherished each moment it had been the way they had celebrated since their parents had died just the two sisters, and now with Sierra so sick they knew they had to cherish the moment, each and every moment.

A few days after Christmas Sierra went for more blood working and the miracle they had been praying for was confirmed, Sierra had gone into spontaneous remission but both Sierra knew that it was not spontaneous at all that n fact it was the Lord who let this miracle happen.

" Thank you Lord. " Was all Sierra could say with the tears of joys in her eyes.


Recycle the story above in one paragraph only with your own words. Don't change the plot! You are still be able to modify the characters and the settings.

A CHRISTMAST WISH

Once upon a time, there was a girl called Sierra. She have a sister, her name was Serena. Sierra was to weak to do much of anything, because she had cancer in her legs. She so suffer from this disease without follow chemo and she must to pumped with morphine to make easy the pain in her body. One night she spoke to Serena that she so tired to fight the matter. When Sierra spoke that, they cried. And then, Sierra require to God in order that, God give strength to get through her matter. When Sierra was up to it, her and Serena would sing Christmas Carols just as they had done every Christmas before, and singing actually made Sierra feel a little better, made her for a moment forget the pain she was suffering. In chrismast time, they celebrated together. They hope, thjey can celebrated the chrismast with their parents again. The christmast day was gone. One day, Sierra went for more blood working and the miracle was happen, she live to spontaneus to thank’s God, and then Sierra knew that God not spontaneus to give the miracle. And then, she say “thanks God”, and her happiness tears was fall.
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sun Dec 07, 2008 4:10 pm

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Sierra sat in the living room watching the lights on the Christmas tree. Serena had decorated the tree alone this year, Sierra had been to week, she was to weak to do much of anything. The miracle she had been praying for hadn’t seem to be granted, the cancer that had taken both of her legs was still ravaging her body, she was no longer on chemo it was no longer working, nothing was working and night and day she was being pumped with morphine to ease the pain.

" Serena I do not think I can hold on much longer. " Sierra said weakly one night.

" Sierra if you are too tired to fight I understand. "

" I want to make it through Christmas. "

Both the girls let the tears fall from their eyes as Sierra spoke. It wasn’t that Sierra had completely giving up hope, but she had to face the fact that she may not make it through this, short of a miracle she would not make it.

Lord give me the strength to get through it, and if I have to go, let Serena be able to get through this.

When Sierra was up to it, her and Serena would sing Christmas Carols just as they had done every Christmas before, and singing actually made Sierra feel a little better, made her for a moment forget the pain she was suffering.

Christmas morning came and Sierra was still hanging in there, it wasn’t an easy fight, but prayers were being answered. Sierra was actually starting to feel better and stronger, but either Sierra or Serena dared not get their hopes up to high, just to have them crushed again.

As they celebrated Christmas just Sierra and Serena together, they cherished each moment it had been the way they had celebrated since their parents had died just the two sisters, and now with Sierra so sick they knew they had to cherish the moment, each and every moment.

A few days after Christmas Sierra went for more blood working and the miracle they had been praying for was confirmed, Sierra had gone into spontaneous remission but both Sierra knew that it was not spontaneous at all that n fact it was the Lord who let this miracle happen.

" Thank you Lord. " Was all Sierra could say with the tears of joys in her eyes.


Recycle the story above in one paragraph only with your own words. Don't change the plot! You are still be able to modify the characters and the settings.

A CHRISTMAST WISH

Once upon a time, there was a girl called Sierra. She have a sister, her name was Serena. Sierra was to weak to do much of anything, because she had cancer in her legs. She so suffer from this disease without follow chemo and she must to pumped with morphine to make easy the pain in her body. One night she spoke to Serena that she so tired to fight the matter. When Sierra spoke that, they cried. And then, Sierra require to God in order that, God give strength to get through her matter. When Sierra was up to it, her and Serena would sing Christmas Carols just as they had done every Christmas before, and singing actually made Sierra feel a little better, made her for a moment forget the pain she was suffering. In chrismast time, they celebrated together. They hope, thjey can celebrated the chrismast with their parents again. The christmast day was gone. One day, Sierra went for more blood working and the miracle was happen, she live to spontaneus to thank’s God, and then Sierra knew that God not spontaneus to give the miracle. And then, she say “thanks God”, and her happiness tears was fall.
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:56 pm

Huhuhuhhuu….

Is a narrative text about the girl have illness CANCER in her legs,

In Christmas day, she can’t to do something, she can't help her sister
only to hope to FJ for her healthy,

But the miracle comes with Sierra


but the important is prase to God,,

santa
py Christmas

lol!

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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Mon Dec 08, 2008 9:02 am

Mr. Chres wrote:
Sierra sat in the living room watching the lights on the Christmas tree. Serena had decorated the tree alone this year, Sierra had been to week, she was to weak to do much of anything. The miracle she had been praying for hadn’t seem to be granted, the cancer that had taken both of her legs was still ravaging her body, she was no longer on chemo it was no longer working, nothing was working and night and day she was being pumped with morphine to ease the pain.

" Serena I do not think I can hold on much longer. " Sierra said weakly one night.

" Sierra if you are too tired to fight I understand. "

" I want to make it through Christmas. "

Both the girls let the tears fall from their eyes as Sierra spoke. It wasn’t that Sierra had completely giving up hope, but she had to face the fact that she may not make it through this, short of a miracle she would not make it.

Lord give me the strength to get through it, and if I have to go, let Serena be able to get through this.

When Sierra was up to it, her and Serena would sing Christmas Carols just as they had done every Christmas before, and singing actually made Sierra feel a little better, made her for a moment forget the pain she was suffering.

Christmas morning came and Sierra was still hanging in there, it wasn’t an easy fight, but prayers were being answered. Sierra was actually starting to feel better and stronger, but either Sierra or Serena dared not get their hopes up to high, just to have them crushed again.

As they celebrated Christmas just Sierra and Serena together, they cherished each moment it had been the way they had celebrated since their parents had died just the two sisters, and now with Sierra so sick they knew they had to cherish the moment, each and every moment.

A few days after Christmas Sierra went for more blood working and the miracle they had been praying for was confirmed, Sierra had gone into spontaneous remission but both Sierra knew that it was not spontaneous at all that n fact it was the Lord who let this miracle happen.

" Thank you Lord. " Was all Sierra could say with the tears of joys in her eyes.


Recycle the story above in one paragraph only with your own words. Don't change the plot! You are still be able to modify the characters and the settings.

once upon the time there are two sisters sierra and serena that love one each other. based on their daily life, sierra infected by a cancer. it make she can not do her activities well because of that. she almost give up because her cancer. she have surrender to GOD about what happened to her next time. but GOD have any plan, in the Christmas morning the prayer from both of the started to answered, sierra stronger than before. they still give hope to GOD. after the christmas sierra was totally strong. the cancer was disappear sierra knew's that GOD had made miracle to her. thank you lord was the words that she said for thanksfull to GOD!!!
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PostSubject: A Christmas Wish   Mon Dec 08, 2008 11:34 am

This time christmas sierra sister that decorated shall alone christmas tree because sierra is taking ill cancer that second attack its foot and sierra do ever pray that there is miracle from God and it becomes to be ardour its life and expectancy that its huge proprietary so makes sierra can withstand and believe on jesus.....
I am sad...... Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:27 am

Sierra the suffering of cancer sitting near the Christmas tree lights while viewing the Christmas tree lights. Serena has been doing many things alone. He continues to pray for a miracle cure for Serena, but difficult for him to get that miracle. cancer disease has made it lose the foot, whereas chemotherapy is not working in the body. everyday on the night she still must be pumped with morphine to reduce pain. But Sierra always pray to God so she can have a strength for she can got a good condition.
When they sang Christmas Carol together, Sierra felt better than before. Although, it's an usual thing every Christmas like decorate Christmas tree.
A few days after that, she went for more blood working. And,,,,
Surprise!!!! She is healthy, no cancer, and no more suffers.
And with falling tears, she said, "thank you Lord!"
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:28 am

Sierra the suffering of cancer sitting near the Christmas tree lights while viewing the Christmas tree lights. Serena has been doing many things alone. He continues to pray for a miracle cure for Serena, but difficult for him to get that miracle. cancer disease has made it lose the foot, whereas chemotherapy is not working in the body. everyday on the night she still must be pumped with morphine to reduce pain.
When they sang Christmas Carol together, Sierra felt better than before. Although, it's an usual thing every Christmas like decorate Christmas tree.
A few days after that, she went for more blood working. And,,,,
Surprise!!!! She is healthy, no cancer, and no more suffers.
And with falling tears, she said, "thank you Lord!"
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:52 am

Sierra only look her sister that decorated the Christmas Tree.
Sierra was one of cancer sufferer who felt everything was not good and unfair. She lost hope and gave up. the cancer disease was taken both of her legs. Seirra not have a longer time to do anything. She only use morphine to ease the pain.
Seirra sister that called Serena, always together with her. Seirra always hope that she will get the miracle. beside that, Seirra always pray to God
When they sang Christmas Carol together, Sierra felt better than before. Although, it's an usual thing every Christmas like decorate Christmas tree.
Their hope, their must always together, because they not have someone. Their parents and their sister was dies. few days after Christmas, Seirra get the miracle from God.... Seirra just give thanks to God and praise Him, because God make the miracle in her life.


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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:52 am

Sierra was one of cancer sufferer who felt everything was not good and unfair. She lost hope and gave up. When she was in the darkness of life, she almost lost her hope to stay alive. But JC gave her a true friend, Serena. Serena gave support and motivation.

When they sang Christmas Carol together, Sierra felt better than before. Although, it's an usual thing every Christmas like decorate Christmas tree.
after that,,,
thanks Lord for Your hear my pray..
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PostSubject: Re: A Christmas Wish   Mon Dec 15, 2008 9:02 am

At the once christmas, the girl in living room look the lights on the Christmas tree she have name is Sierra. And she have a sister, that is Serrena that always with her.
Sierra was one of cancer sufferer who felt everything was not good and unfair. She lost hope and gave up. the cancer disease was taken both of her legs. Seirra not have a longer time to do anything. She only use morphine to ease the pain.
Seirra sister that called Serena, always together with her. Seirra always hope that she will get the miracle. beside that, Seirra always pray to God
When they sang Christmas Carol together, Sierra felt better than before. Although, it's an usual thing every Christmas like decorate Christmas tree.
Their hope, their must always together, because they not have someone. Their parents and their sister was dies. few days after Christmas, Seirra get the miracle from God.... Seirra just give thanks to God and praise Him, because God make the miracle in her life

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